“Benefits
and Efficacy of Guava Fruit”
by: Dece Elisabeth Sahertian
Figure 1. Guava Fruits
Critical
Analysis :
In my opinion,
this article has not been consistent in use of
the word. The word used is "Guava" and
"Cashew". If the beginning of the sentence has been using the word
Guava, until the end
of this article too. Guava in Indonesian
language means jambu biji while the "cashew" means jambu mete.
In paragraph 3, contained the phrase “Because
of this high
content of lycopene,
in Indonesia, guava
fruit juice is
often used to increase
of platelet levels of patients with dengue
fever disease", this sentence is not right
in this section because it
deals reduce the
risk of heart
disease. This sentence
should be written out in paragraph 4,
which describes the lycopene or its uses in paragraph 6 which subtopic Red Guava Juice does not Correlate Directly in the Treatment of DHF.
In
paragraph 6, is required to add a description of the disease dengue fever.
Dengue fever is caused by a virus dengeu transmitted through mosquito bites of
Aedes aegypti and Aedes albopictus. Dengeu has four serotype viruses
(classification of viruses), which DENV-1, DENV-2, DENV-3, and DENV-4. The four
dengue serotype found in Indonesia, DENV-2 and DENV-3 was the dominant serotype.
Dengue virus can live in clean, stagnant water and in an open containerin your backyards, which without doubt become
eventually, artificial mosquito breeding grounds.
Guava
contains more vitamin
C than oranges
with the same weight. Very useful to fix the capillary so
that no leakage occurred. Therefore, prevention of outbreak of the capillary so that no leak can be made with guava
juice drink regularly.
however, guava juice
does not cure dengue
fever, but only adds to the fluid in the body
and increase endurance.
I think, the contents
of this article is very good to readers because it includes studies of the
experts to strengthen this articles, where there is real evidence of proof-of
benefits and efficacy of guava fruit.
References
Diah,
E. 2011. Benefits and Efficacy of Guava Fruit.
http://healthmad.com/conditions-anddiseases/benefits-and-efficacy-of-guava-fruit. (20 Januari 2011).
Farisdani. 2010. Red Guava juice reduce dengue fever.
http://healthcareflash.com/redguava-juice-reduce-dengue-fever.html.
(21 Januari 2011)
Wahyuningsih,
M. 2010. Benarkah Virus Demam Berdarah
Bermutasi?. http://health.detik.com/read/2010/04/27/163549/1346491/763/benarkah-virus-demam-berdarah-bermutasi. 25
Januari 2011.
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